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yet another speedy ..2 hours , on photoshop cs2 .

Testing out a new rock brushset by djahal.


Each man when he is old enought must follow the path to the cave , where the most dangerous creatures hide in the haze and fog , to hunt one of them and prove his value toward his tribe.

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:icondontfeedtheaxel:
first of all sorry if things i say seem unclear but english is not my native language so i dont have the perfect conditions to really say what i want to. but i try to express myself as clear as i can^^"
sooo...
i really like this one!
the depth is just awesome. the mist really supports the effect.
i dont know how the brushes you use work but they seem to do their job pretty good.
the structure on the cave's walls are really rocky.they have a rough surface but are also defined.
i love the red light sources and the red glow they emit. also the red lighning on the rocks and the mist looks really good and convincing.
another thing i like is how small the character compared to the whole picture is. this gives the feeling of how unimportant one is compared to the greater things is (in this case the tribe he has to prove his value to)
the water is also really nice. i like the reflections

the only thing i dislike a bit is the lack of the deteil on the creatures in the background. i know..they are far away and covered in mist but i for myself would like to see a little bit more of them

all in all a really well done piece of art!
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:iconsushimitzu:
And if that man isn't in a tribe? What then?

Nice glow!

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"The more beautiful and pure something is, the more satisfying it is to corrupt it, isn't it?"
True for me.
:iconexphrasis:
he is in a tribe ^^ .

It's some kind of a test. If he manages to hunt one and bring his head back he's accepted , otherwise he's either banned ( if he survives ) or just dies , trying to huunt the creature. Hehe

thanks ! :)

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"Il est de l'amour véritable comme de l'apparition des esprits...Beaucoup en parlent ,peut en ont déjà vu. "

-eXphrasis-
:iconmoonlitcrescent:
Wow, I like the depth, the atmosphere, the new texture, the dude and the beacons, the water, the concept, pretty much the entire thing - oh, and the roof.

The creatures lack form, but I'm guessing that's intentional. Very well done, especially for 2 hours.

Sorry I couldn't be of more help :)

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Humorous real world newspaper headlines:

- CYCLONE HITS CEMETERY - HUNDREDS DEAD
- CHILDREN MAKE NUTRITIOUS SNACKS
- IS THERE A RING OF DEBRIS AROUND URANUS?
- PATIENT AT DEATH'S DOOR - DOCTORS PULL HIM THROUGH
+ more to come!
:iconsushimitzu:
Hahaha, okay. xD

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"The more beautiful and pure something is, the more satisfying it is to corrupt it, isn't it?"
True for me.
:icondarknessofeverlife:
love the depth and atmosphere of the cave

btw, those beasts are BIG
how is he supposed to kill one of them??

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I don't think to much because I have to much spare time, but because I have the spare brain capacity to do it.
:iconexphrasis:
thanks a lot : )

That's why it's Zee test hehehe .
And he's got a rifle. Pretty good one. Problem is they're usually travelling in couples , so that's where it becomes hard. hehe

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"Il est de l'amour véritable comme de l'apparition des esprits...Beaucoup en parlent ,peut en ont déjà vu. "

-eXphrasis-
:icondarknessofeverlife:
:D

well, I'm glad I won't have to try that, even though I'm pretty skilled with a rifle ..

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I don't think to much because I have to much spare time, but because I have the spare brain capacity to do it.
:iconcephei-n-ciel:
Well done! but, what are the floating things?
And here's your second question:
Approximately how many colors do you use for these (shades)?
:icondarqcube:
Ahah, I like how this one has the reds and the other had the blues. I like the blues better though, they seem more calm.

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